如何提升雅思写作语法?

1. The environment has been damaged severely, we need to protect our environment.

缺少and/so连接词

2. The air in rural areas is much better than urban areas.

比较对象错误

应该是....better than that in urban areas.

3. There are two people sit there and talk with each other happily.

动词数量问题(更深层次是非谓语错误)

sit和talk都加ing

4. It is benefit to people if they could persist on exercise.

比较简单粗暴但是很多同学犯的错误

benefit改成beneficial

5. Knowing that students may be tempted from TV programs, it is important that students should be supervised by parents at home.

逻辑主语的问题，逗号的后面应该改成

......., parents need to supervise students at home.

6. Government needs to protect our environment.

government是可数名词哦

7. Teacher salaries rose from 40% in 1981 to 50% in 1991.

40%和50%后面各加一个of the total school spending(来源自剑8T2T1)

8, The number of married Americans reduced from 100000 in 1922 to 50000 in 1930.

reduce表示的并不是具体数字的下降，改成简单的decline/decrease/drop即可

9. The price of iPhone reached a peak which is 3400 rmb in 1990.

不要使用定从去描述句子，你可以用with连接